My friend
智库作文
2019-09-23
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Xiao Ming and I are good friend.We ofen read books and play games together.Xiao Ming is 12 years old,and I am 12 years old.But she heavier than me.She"s 35 kilograms.I"am 32 kilograms.Xiao Ming is 1.41 meters.I"m 3 cm taller than Xiao Ming.I"m1.44 meters.We are classmates.We all like drawing.
We are good friends!
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Xiao Ming and I are good friends. We ofen read books and play games together. Xiao Ming is 12 years old, and I am 12 years old, too. She is heavier than me. She"s 35 kilograms, and I"m 32 kilograms. Xiao Ming is 1.41 meters. I"m 3 cm taller than Xiao Ming. We are classmates.We all like drawing.
修改教师：Andy老师
六年级：罗晶莹